Decent

This was decent but could still use some more effort but this was an artistic style and really showed some effort and I really like what you did with the backround very nice then main character all color that was a plus so all in all this was ok but could have been better but overall was notbad and showed some artistic style here

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Nice but could use more effort throughout

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Simple

The colors you picked fit a scene in the desert very well. The man's expression matches his question and the overall tone.

I don't think you should have made his facial hair transparent the way you did, it seems a bit weird. But then again, this piece is exactly that, so it's not much of a problem.

One other thing would be the sky. Instead of bars, have the horizon blend together.

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Etch-a-sketch?

The background looks better in this one, because the red, orange and yellow have been blended, rather than separated with black lines - it's a trifle uniform, but that can easily be remedied.

The detail of the old man needs to be worked on here - you seem too eager to publish and don't spend enough time touching up the fine detail. The speech bubble is done more harm than good by the fact that the Y in yours is backwards and the I should be a capital letter.

A lack of hands and feet really signals your intention to give in and not submit the finished piece. Please pay attention to the details, add a splash of colour to the characters and then try submitting, it will make such a difference.

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I like the head.

The head has been done really well. I like the sketchy style of it. It looks like you've taken a lot of time here, but given up on the rest of it.

Try not to use generic MSPaint shapes so much. One example of this is the speech bubble. It would look better if you had drawn it freehand.

The colours are quite nice.. One thing that strikes me is that you never colour your characters. There's nothing wrong with that, but why do you do it?

Overall, I think you just need to get a new art program and spend a bit more time on your art.

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Best one so far

Wow, a picture where I like all sides equally. ;)

I think the face is drawn very good, whereas the body still needs some work. The scenery is quite nice, but I like Fro's idea of having a few waves in the sky because of it being in a desert where it's usually pretty hot.

But I like how the colors go along pretty well together in this picture.

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