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MultiCanimefanMultiCanimefan

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars Jul 19, 2009

Very strange

The characters need a bit of a touch up, as they seem a bit rushed. I would also suggest adding a bit more color to them because as they are, they're a little bland to look at.

Once again, I like the colors you put in. The purple and blue seem to go very well with each other, a bit fuzzy too, but that's not a bad thing.

When you separate the sky and the landscape, don't just put a straight black line. Try to have them mesh together, especially in a piece like this.

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Silent-G responds:

when you separate your mind from your body, don't just put a straight black cock. try to have them mesh together, especially in your first attempt. thanks for the review.


CoopCoop

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars Jul 18, 2009

Tidy it up

I think that this piece is in desperate need of tidying up - the black line between the sky and land should never have been there in the first place - try blending the colours together, to give an impression of a landscape where grasses wave in the breeze, for example.

The cloudscape is a decent effort, I'll give you that - While it could use the attention to detail that a lot of this image shows, you have got that certain abstract feel to it, which is nice.

Finally, the three figures - try making their eyes look less like random scribbles and if you're trying to make them look perfectly round, spend some time making it look round. If not, at least fill them in with black, as it will look much better.

They have coloured flowers on their lapels, so why not give their suits some colour as well? No self-respecting person ever wears a white suit with white shirt and black tie. At least some colour in the shirt should help.

Lastly, you need to sort their mouths out - the teeth don't follow all the way to the lips - perhaps drawing some gums would help, plus it's a colour opportunity. Also, I've just noticed the copy / paste / flip that you've done here - it's a cheat and does your work no justice.

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Silent-G responds:

you're literally being literally literal mister little literal literature licker. thanks for the literal review, literally.


InsanimationInsanimation

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars Jul 15, 2009

Cluttered.

It looks like its trying to be really psychadelic, but it isn't really working.

I like the top bit with the textured effect, but it just splits the picture in half.

I'm not too keen on the shades of green and blue that you used. They're too generic and boring. Try to find more interesting shades of colour.

I also don't like how you've coloured in the holes in the text, it looks childish and cluttered.

Nothing really makes any sense. It just looks like you've taken some random text, and drawn a picture completely unrelated.

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Silent-G responds:

things rarely make much sense, and then I try to draw them, and then people like you don't understand them, and then you tell me how much you hate things that you can't understand, and then I let you know what's up, and then you're man is all over my girl sayin all like 'wut up lemme fuck yer butt hole' and then I'm like bitch fuck you, and before you know it there's milk all over the floor and what then? huh? what then you fucking bitch!? thanks for the review.


JKMonkeyJKMonkey

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Jul 14, 2009

weird

Good job with this one man, looked really weird. The characters in this piece were the weirdest looking, especially the one in the center, i dont know if theyre an interpretation of humans or monsters or what, but they looked cool, good job. And the cloud of purple on top of them looked really cool as well, very fuzzy and made the piece look very intriguing. Good job here man, keep up the good work.

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Silent-G responds:

thank you.


HaggardHaggard

Rated 3 / 5 stars Jul 14, 2009

Nice characters

In this picture I like the bottom half more than the top half, heh.

Again the characters look pretty nice, even though it seems you just drew one character and mirrored the other one off it.

I can't figure out what to do with those purple thing in the sky, though. Kinda disturbs the picture as those colors don't fit with the other colors you used. But maybe that was just your intention? Disturbing the picture with colors that don't fit.

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Silent-G responds:

that was always my intention, I never make mistakes. thanks for the review.