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Cartoon - Alaric and Piona

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May 14, 2010 | 5:19 PM EDT
Fine Art
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This is a cartoon drawing of my favourites - Alaric and Piona.
Made with india ink and coloured pencil.



Rated 2 / 5 stars

You can do better

and proved so in other pictures. Conept art of course has a way of not being final, but usually I'd expect the characters in different poses, portraying their character and how they are drawn standing, walking, in action, etc.

But of course, this is just to get a visualization of characters that were already created elsewhere. So, it is again not too horrible and somewhat fitting. She is definetely better drawn than him, more detailed - colored, etc. But both faces are sub-par, drawing of her hands is avoided, he has almost no shading at all. This might seem like nitpicking, but overall it makes this a worse picture than what I have seen up until now.

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Shati responds:

In defence I have to say that this was my VERY FIRST comic drawing of my favourites. Maybe I will post my better ones. As to Alaric... well, there is not much on him that is coloured, you know, he has white hair and almost always wears white robes... And as a comic drawing, I didn't care about shading.
Thank you for your review.