I cant tell if you focused too much on her head or her bod.
The body look nicely highlighted but compared to the body it seems a bit flat. Nice lining. Very smooth.
Her head looks like a mixture of pastel and colored pencil. Compared to the body, it looks incomplete. The hair is a mixture of all shades of red and too varied. It does blend nicely though.

Sorry about that. I usually dont talk like that. Im more of a âEUI luv it!âEU kind of guy. I actually have no idea what Im talking about. I love how it glows like that and the hair looks like a well blended mixture of red and orange.

A+

I really really like the face in this. I don't think anyone else on NG draws with asian features, but this is really cute. It loses a lot of detail with the rest of the drawing though. I'd rate this highly for the face and hair alone