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Aug 15, 2010 | 3:37 AM EDT
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This is page one of my final project in my art class last year

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KinseiKinsei

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Very Bad Layout.

You need to Work on panel layout and comic flow.
When I first started reading, I had no clue where to start, much less where to go after I did start.

Work on anatomy and yout general sketching skills.

Also take time to shade your work. This looks like water color, so that alone makes it a bit more challenging to work with. Before you do any more projects with water colors, be sure to read a couple of books or tutorials on how to use them properly.

2/10


semeieseed responds:

Thanks for your review :) I'll keep your advice in mind.
The watercoloring was very rushed because I did it all in one night for a school project. There are 2 other pages too this but I don't think It'd pass over very well like this one.