It's always great to see a deep amount of neon colors which catches the eyes. I love how you changed direction from a sketch and decided to turn her alive which was a great dicision. Remember all big ideas come from small thoughts. It's really hard to come up with some negative thoughts. The only thing I can come up with is that I miss more neon colors and deeper shadows. But that's only a small complain which you may consider. Keep doing what you're good at!