Needs some color

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was intersting, i think you said something about adding color to your works or even newer stuff, this drawing or sketch could use some of that color, maybe not {FILL-IN} but probably just adding differant colors with with the sketch lines and such, it wouldnt over kill on color but at the sametime give some color to the linework,just an idea there that would make this somewhat even better then it already is, something you should think about trying, so some extra color would be nice key, other then that i thought it was alright, so untill next time, good luck on anything new you may be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color {LINE-WORK} would be a start

~X~

Seems familiar

I had a friend in high school that used to do drawings like this, only it seems that he did his in reverse order. He would always start with a clean sketch of what he wanted his base layer to be then he would add on some squiggles to make it what he wanted it to look like. All in all this is not a bad piece of art just seems like something that could look a little cleaner and buttoned up.

Alright I suppose

Not the best thing I have seen so far anyways. I could probably have done the same thing in just a couple of seconds sadly. Instead of just jaggedly drawing lines to form a figure here as you did, try doing abstract doodling or at least try to draw with straight lines and then add on stuff to the image to give it a better look.

Looks like it was harshly drawn in anger or out of sadness rather than actually trying sadly. I think if you slowed down a bit and actually tried a little harder next time you could end up with a better piece than this.

Overall, a super quick doodle with almost no effort. :C

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