I like it, but.....
Fix the eyes and give it color, other than that it's perfect.
flower
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I'm working on creating some characters for some short stories that I'm writing. This one is called flower. The stories focus on extreme contrast of life and death. With "flower", she's more of a wild flower that since the time of birth knows she will only live 3 months. The art is kind of psychedelic and almost child like in a way.
saramary3 responds:
Thank you so much for your input. I drew this freehand with an ink pen and some parts of it came out a little odd, hence no eyes and the arm came out a little funky. I plan on reworking this one.
I don't see anything out of ordinary
good piece, clean nice line work in some cases, the words within the drips are a nice touch- but it feels stiff, I don't get the expression out of it, I feel no reaction.
Just a good picture. I like it though it shows skill in your talents, keep going at it, I am keeping an eye on your work:)
saramary3 responds:
Thank you! This is the first constructive criticism that I've received and it's much appreciated!
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