Interesting

So this was an interesting piece of art here a nice sketch and looks good would love to see a finsihed product on this one but looks great and some nice talents showcased in your drawing here anyways keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More fuller and finished product

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Looks like a good start! Kinda artistic way of bringing fourth just the one eye, making the portrait seem alive in just one place. If it wasn't for all the sketch outlines and paper borders it'd be almost like a finished work. :)

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