Author's Comments
Some of my OCs going for a swim in some random jungle spring, but I won't bother to explain anything on here, because I doubt anyone will be paying attention to the description. lol
Drawn with Adobe Photoshop CS3 using a WACOM pen tablet.
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 8.9 / 10
this isnt art this is sex driven trash.
do real art.
Could be better. Dont feel like writing an in depth review of it. Its good... it could be better. keep at it.
The background is very smooth, but as lots of people said, you dont have to add girls about to take off there clothes you know, attracting attention is always about seeing the picture and thinking about its vote. You dont have to make people go like:oooooahhahah!! hey lil guy, look at this! oooh! hey you look at this! That isnt attracting attention, its making people tell people ot look at it, they just vote for the girls, not the beautiful background.If you DID want to attract attention by using girls, make a new title including girls.Its still good for putting effort into the girls tho. Loved the sparkles.
Author's Response:
Your explanation is really confusing, (sorry) but I kinda get what you mean..
Originally, this was just a background by itself, without the girls, but I figured no one gives a crap about some jungle spring on Newgrounds, so I posted the version with girls in it.
I still have the background by itself. It's my desktop background to this day.
nice sprinkly shiny things in the water, i like it
i love too 10 but if it was real i can give it a 100%
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While it is good, the texture of the background seems to be different than the girls. I don't count against that, as I think it was on purpose to make a veiwer be drawn (was that a pun?) to the girls, because they are different from the background. Also, pointy ears? A little nerdy, but you make up for it for an unnatural ability to draw so well.
YOU ARE TOO GOOD!!!
The girls do look a little weird. I also noticed that the girl's ears were pointy. Was that on purpose? Nice pic tho!
Author's Response:
Yep. They're OC's of mine from waaay back.. The one with pointy ears is a Vampire.
You are a very good artist! Congratulations!
I'm not a professional when it comes to rating pictures neither am i that good at art... but it is apparent that the background really has a lot of effort in it and that the girls look somehow.. added or something. If that really is true then could you tell me why you added them? Because if it was for the reason i think it is; that you want to draw attention to your pictures with those then don't. Your pictures are good enough and if you DO want to draw girls in a picture try spending equally much time on the girls as on the background! :) I hope this was helpful and that you can reflect on it. Overall good work:)
Blue La-goon...
I can't wait to when I can draw like that....
Makes me wanna go swimming
that background is basically amazing minus the........fugly girls......OTHER THEN THAT great job love your work keep it up.
Author's Response:
... "fugly girls".
Wow, thanks.
I think it is greatest painting I ever seen and keep up yhe good job.
Now, this is the kind of picture you want to hang on your wall and look at and say, "Hmmmmmm, maybe I should join the local spa soon!" ^ _ -
Good stuff, keep it coming!
I did read the discription cause although a picture can say a thousand words, those words can be seductive and specious. So i like to here wat the artist intended. But i have to say, seems like you intended most every word to be exactly wat you get from a bunch of girls at a jungle spring :D
..l think you're a bit too young for this site if you can't even differentiate art without ANY nudity AT ALL from porn, which implies some nudity or sexual activity going on.
I say, grow up, and then come back here.
OK, now that l got this outta my system l can start the proper review.
The background is really good....the girls are a bit wierd, yes, but not THAT much.
It's just that the background's art style is different from the foreground's, so this picture actually looks like one picture on top of another one..
..well, it's not your best work.
Author's Response:
lol thanks for sticking up for me about crab12's comment.
And about this not being my best work.. Yeah I agree. It's a couple of years old, so I can confidently say that I can do better than this now. :P
That being said, I really do like the background just by itself. ^^
Hey mate, write your description. I read them. they're the most interesting thing in the order of: Art, description, reviews. :D
Author's Response:
hahaha - well that's sweet of you, thanks. XD
Your background is absolutely stunning minus the images of a girls back pointing towards our view, everything is else is cool the water is fine as well,
the other reviewers already pointed out there is something wrong with the proportion of the body mainly going down from the waist, the sense of depth is a little odd somewhere but I cant pinpoint it.
Your coloring is beautiful, better results if you tried to match the skin tone of your characters and the position of your light source, all the best
Author's Response:
lol - Back when I drew this, I didn't notice the crazy nonesensical proportions, but now that I have no intention of fixing it, go figure, everyone points it out and now it drives me nuts!
Light sources are always tough for me -- oddly. I always end up picking a light source lazily half-way through the colouring of the picture.
I must be the only guy here to have read the description.
Nice work.
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I think i'm getting horny here!!!
But I recommend studying female anatomy first before drawing anything like this. It'd actually be attractive if I wasn't looking at disproportionate and unrealistically proportioned chicks. I'm being honest here.
Author's Response:
Yikes. lol
..Well, hopefully i've improved over the past 4 years! :P
In my defence, it's fairly old.
very very hot.
also your super good at drawings, characters and backgrounds. nice :)
i like how you did the background, it all seems to flow...the girls are nice too ;3
"Agree w/ DeadlySkill & givin professional review."
First Omnigon is a hypocrite to his own words, so it is best to ignore his idiocy. I agree that DeadlySkill should respond to this unfair review, but do so outside of the actual review area. I will let it go this time, but if I see this from either of you again there will be consequences. Am I being clear?
Okay... This piece is very sultry. The texture, coloring, and shading are very well developed. The background even looks as if it is made from brush strokes, which adds a surreal feeling about the jungle spring. The figures proportions are slightly off, there hourglass's (butt to waist to bust) are way to elongated. I think overall it is a very nice work. Keep up the good work.
Hey asshole, draw better and THEN you can say its bad. 'Aight? Piss off till you can draw you 10 year old shithole.
this art is super i wote 10 beucause i lowe hot chicks
This is very well done/
Yeah the girls are pretty, but the background is amazing.
I am not an artist but I can appreciate that.
So any of these people who say different are just ridiculous.
I think you should really do some scenery images .
Omnigon can fuck off, nobody cares about if this is fine art or manga, we all know its fuckin manga asshole if u r gonna rate this low, rate it because its manga and sucks too, not because you dont like this style lol
and this is kinda sexy but no way in hell this is porn lol porn is 2 ppl fuckin and real ppl, if it was anime porn it would be hentai but why ppl dont know terms properly?porn is not a manga drawing of girls in small bikinis WTF
this was awesome, but the girl in black bikini has a weird body, too long, otherwise this was great... and u could untie the pale´s hair, it would be sexier
Author's Response:
THANKYOU ;v;
The two guys below me are right :D and what a piece of art, you're very talented ^^ this is really sexy :3
The guy that's below is right. The guy below him can f off.
Author's Response:
You guys are so great :'3
Thanks!
The fag below my review can go piss off. This is a very good piece of work. nicely done! They are all very sexy btw. BTW, the person below this review must obviously be gay to not like this piece.
Author's Response:
He's just a troller of high-traffic galleries trying to get views by pissing off NG users.. Aparently it's working; but yeah I agree. Fuck him. D:>
I fucking love this piece, so he can shove it.
The word fag fails to encompass the totality of your anime-lust. This is called a fine art portal; not an anime portal. When you learn the basics of art, come back here.
really sexy.
watching people younger than me or my same age that can draw SO MUCH better than me can't be good for my self esteem, LOL. keep it up, as for me, I'll keep practicing.
and to the guy below me, nudity doesn't mean porn either, porn is a vulgar depiction of sexuality with no artistic orientation whatsoever, made only for profit and, if you wanna be crude about it, masturbation, pictures like this qualify more as erotic art to me, it aims at playing with your emotions, shaking you off your base, make you question your sexuality or that of others, and maybe even arouse you, in a much more subtle way (probably even gross you out or scare you shitless, believe me, I've seen some pretty damn disturbing work, LOL)
_comment to guy below me_ its not really porn its more ecchi cuz if it was porn they would be naked but i dont see any nudity so ide say ecchi ok but now for my comment ide say judgeing from my books its almost at the top of the ladder and continue youre work also i love how you drew the waterfall in the backround it looks awesome
Give us something thats not porn...please...
Author's Response:
Sorry you feel that way about my work, but if I may, I wouldn't classify this as pornography, though you might have a very different opinion. There are plenty of other things in this picture to appreciate, other than the fact that the girls in it are a little scantily claid. For example, the background took over three times as long to draw than the actual characters in this picture.
I don't even draw full-on nudity, so this is as close as it gets to "porn". Please try to differentiate the two next time around.
Thanks for your concern.
~Sab
Make A Tutorial For All Of Us
Can Draw Like You!!
Good Shit Man Keep It Up
I think you are an amazing artist. I payed attention to the background in this photo, and I like your use of shading, blah blah blah you rock my socks. But this can't be all you have. Especially since you mentioned in one comment that you have a DeviantArt. Wouldn't it be so rad though, if you were to post that awesome stuff here? Newgrounds could use the extra art if its art section is to prosper.
You are so friggin' great at drawing. Keep it up. But it'd be great to see ALL of your stuff on here, not just the sexy stuff that attracts SARANGHAMNIDA!'s.
Keep being awesome!
I like the backgound.
lol its weird but true
Teasers are always better than naked girls. 100% of the time. This is because if they're still wearing clothes, you're like, sitting on the edge of your seat with your eyes glued to he screen rying to mentally undress them. Then when they actually take their clothes on you're like "Oh...thats what it looks like...". The bus ride is better than the field trip. Everytime. I'm sure most guys can relate.
But uh, yeah. Nice pic.
Author's Response:
lol that's an amusing way to put it.
thanks!
I love the environment
Besides the girls being super hot, the background is very good as well. There's a lot of detail in this and I like that. Water is super hard to draw and it looks really good in this. Also, girl pulling bikini = hotness!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks!
Glad some people are noticing the environment rather than just the subjects. ;)
I like because its good art keep make more
Really love ur artwork and I'm not just saying that becuase most of them are of beautiful girls. Love the background and the characters. Hopefully I'll be as good as u one day.
Great drawing!!!!
