Nifty design
Nice face everything else seems bland maybe some borders or added detail in the backround would be nice, you can clearly see and while there is no or little color it is a nice piece you have here and the talent shows off well, so keep making great black and white stuff like this, and remember some added color never hurts but its your simple idea from line work to a nifty design that shines.
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Nice face everything else seems bland maybe some borders or added detail in the backround would be nice
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