competent linework and composition

first, linework is pretty awesome.

composition wise, all pieces work together perfectly well.

proportions are aesthetically pleasing.

i found nothing to give constructive criticism to. hhmmm perhaps rendering it in color maybe.

anyway, good job. this would have been fun pen tooling in illustrator, i'm a bit jealous now.

all in all, fantastic illustration.

Great Job!

In my opinion, I think this is one of the better drawings in gothic/dark art. But, it's also in a way a peaceful drawing? Mostly I just found it to look AWESOME.

awesome dude

very cool i love that thick line on the outside and the composition.

OMG

This is a very beautiful peace of art here. I could stare at it forever..........

Nice work.

Very lovely piece of work here. If you don't mint a little criticism read on. I'd love to see the piece colored. If you're gonna continue creating art with outlines I'd recomend the book "Hi-Fi Color for Comics" by Brian and Kristy Miller. As a B&W image there are some things that bother me. The grey box. For one everything else is black or white, and so it seems out of place. Also it's got pixel jaggies around the outside. If I knew what program you had used I could talk you through fixing this. Lastly there is a bit below the rose that is a lighter color grey than the rest.

I wouldn't have commented if I didn't think this piece was great. You've obviously got talent. I'd like to see you move toward a more finished piece.