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Super toad speedpaint 2,5 hour

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Speedpaint for one challenge.
Can anyone give me some critique? Please

I swear i'm not the monkey to throw my shit into someone who'll judge me ^^@~

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Is actually good for a speedpaint mostly speedpainters paint faces, well from what i seen. I actually like the colors it was a really nice touch the fact that the frog is really nicely done but the only thing that has me meh is the water it could of used more blue. But, beside the point is really nicely done.

Aright first thing I wan't to say is that this is a difficult piece to critique for 2 reasons, your art style makes it hard to tell what is supposed to be detailed or not, and its fantasy so its difficult to tell what I am looking at, but hear it go's.
Aright over all I love this piece the color's are very complimentary, it inspires a good Awe feeling, and even though you didn't use much detail you can still get a very good idea of what is going on.
Now as for the nightie gritty, the beach area(at least I think its a beach) in-front of the toad is a bit hard to distinguish from the cliffs around it, either make the detail more curved, sunk in as if its eroded or sandy; Lack of that ta heck with the beach and make it just as the cliffs around it. there's, also that corner on the bottom left side where you just left the outer edge just flat and rigged; Don't do that, at least make it foggy or broken up by other details, otherwise it just kills the whole fantasy effect of the art. other than that some ambient affects would be nice, fish in the water, mossy rocks and grass that sorta thing. O also the pilings on the dock would go above the dock itself, or there would at least be cleats to tie your boat off on, because there's noway anyone would ever tie off under the dock, just wouldn't happen.

Well, I hope it helps. I'll be looking out for ya.

RimKeLLo responds:

Thank you a lot.
Your critique give me a bunch of ideas! It's a gold ))

The dark patches of green on the grass creates the idea of small trees or a bush. This creates a misjudgement of size comparison between that, the figures, and the toad.
The sides can be cropped out so the focus can be just between the toad and the figures.

RimKeLLo responds:

Thank you.
OK i think i must to redraw the whole thing.
Maybe rethink the composition. Cuz i want to make this toad looks HUGE. Not just huge, i'll make the giant god of water or something ) And the cliffs must be far far away

Looks like a RPG boss fight location. :)

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Feb 17, 2014
2:14 PM EST
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