You did a real good job on the clothing and hair, and the slightly out of focus nature of this work really adds to the strength of it. The roof tiles could be a bit better in nature, yet there's a nice abstractness in their presentation. There seems to a need to a gentle wind as well- keep working at it.

VERY impressive! Not only is the composition of this piece appropriate, it's also stunningly clever and well thought out! The eye is led exactly as you want it to be, and visual interest is strong throughout, with a good balance of perspective and detail. the painting style is somewhat cloudy and lacking in solidity but that aside the overall balance of the image is great, keep it up and tanks for sharing :)