This one is good too

It seems like you were going for a very stylized look on this one. My only problem with it is that when I first looked at it, it was hard to tell what it was. Well, actually, that wouldn't be a problem because it actually made me study this pic a little bit harder than usual. I guess the only thing I would suggest doing is make the outline stand out a bit more around the joints, you know, like where the let meets the hip? I see where you drew the crease where the thigh and hip meets but it was kind of hard to look at and made the entire thing except for this guys head, look like a shadow. Now, if that was the look you were going for then this pic is really kicking ass then! I hope you have some more work to show off. Nice going homie!!