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i made this for forsakenx5950
sort of a commission
credit to mega-supreme for the original drawing

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Pretty picture, he Warrior or Assasin? :D

Nice!

This drawing is rather well done, congrats! :D

The Good:

- I love the shading/ color on the torso and legs.
- The background is pretty cool, and I generally like the color choices there as well.
- The tattoo work is pretty awesome... besides the flaw on the cheek that has been pointed out already.
- Your character anatomy is right-on!

The Bad:

- The hair is cool, but purple/ pink may not be the right color for this one; It completely conflicts with the rest of the colors in this piece .
- The arm on the right bugs me, it seems to be in a typical pose or something (Can't really put my finger on it)

Besides that though...
This is awesome!

~Dj Sonik

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Rennis5 responds:

yeah, this one needs a few touch ups, the guy who asked me to do this wants me to make his eye white so it looks like he is blind,
aslo the hair is supposed to be red, it might look better if i make it dark red and as for the arm i think the problem is the forearm needs to be a bit fatter around where it meets the elbow,
thanks for the review dude
:)

Impressive.

This is quite a nice drawing, I can't honestly see many errors, so excuse me if I go nitpicky.

-In the lower left, right around where the hand weapon meets the pants, it seems like the belt buckle is transparent and showing the pants/weapon behind it.
-At the other hand weapon, there's a strap that seems like it's coming off the weapon.
-The hands have fingers that look a tad too rectangular and uniform, try putting a joint right before the fingernail and making that part bulge out by a slight amount.
-It seems like hair is growing out of his armpit on the left side of the picture.
-The markings, when going from his neck to his cheek, seem to act as if there is no space between them, they just go straight onto the cheek. Could be corrected by moving the markings on the cheek by a slight amount, so they don't line up quite so perfectly.

That's all I've got for things that could be improved. The background fits in quite well, the overall artwork is quite good, it looks very realistic, considering, and the little errors I noticed probably won't be seen unless you are either looking for errors or look at it for a long time.

Awesome job!

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-SWINT-

Rennis5 responds:

yeah, i didn't see the problem with the buckle untill after i had uploaded it and i think i will try to put more detail into fingers in the future,
also i really rushed the tattoos, i don't think anyone has pointed out yet that the tattoos have no shading!! "dun dun dun"
thanks for you'r review
:)

Pretty cool

Well he looks like an interesting person with a back bone and story to him anyways. Looks like he just got done being in a battle as well which is pretty cool I would guess by looking at him. Kind of chuckled a bit at his abs though since the tattoos make it look like he has six nipples there, hilarious.

The background kind of makes me think that he could be tripping on acid or near a gassy area where the battle has been finished. His tattoos are interesting to say the least since they are everywhere on him. The bandages help hide his injuries I would guess.

The pants are cool looking and I like his weapons as well too. The facial expression seems to be annoyance here and his pink hair is just cool to me, not bad at all.

Overall, interesting person.

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Rennis5 responds:

well i'm glad someone actually likes the hair
thank you for the reveiw
:)

Well drawn, but very unrealistic

It's a really well-drawn piece, you seem to have some knowledge of anatomy of this style.

I'm really enjoying the coloring and shading on this piece. The shading has multiple gradients, as do the colors. You've also added in lighting, which looks fairly good, and the facial construction is also good. Even the fingers you've made look good, and I know a lot of people have big problems with that.

The background is all right, abstract, I don't know if it's just there to fill in or something else, but it looks good nonetheless, and makes sure the picture doesn't look boring.

My issue is the hard edges and lines, and the fact that there is absolutely no texture to the body. It looks good, but it looks far too plain, and very unrealistic. I'm aware you didn't go for a realistic feel with this piece, it is after all in a style inspired by Japanese/Korean drawings, but even the drawings in such styles have characters that are somewhat flawed.

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Rennis5 responds:

i must thank mega-supreme for the anatomy.
i'm not sure what you mean about not having texture on the body.
i explained about the background in coops review,
as for the hard edges i did do another version of this with no line art but it dosn't really look all that good, maybe with a bit more work it would put this one to shame.
I would not say that those characters are flawed because art is whatever you want to make it and exaggeration is key to representing what you want you'r aduience to experience

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