I'm BACK! I suppose if I could say anything is that, to me, is that it looks a little flat. The wings and perhaps body parts? The eyes look wonderful! I see that they aren't the same with the eyes varying in the size. I hope I'm doing something here because I feel as though you're reading these. (If you are thank you for paying me mind and hi! I love your work) basically I feel as though the various body parts seem really smooth. Like a certain parts I enjoy very much and if it's part of your style then it's great! Perhaps without being too biased which I hope I'm not having maybe focus on the body showing muscle as it reminds me of hot dogs very nice looking hot dogs.

Very good very good