Notbad at all

I like what you have here a great scene of some mystery, the "FIRE" was nice but maybe as a small suggestion of improvment you could have a trickle of smoke from the fire, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A trickle of smoke would be a nice touch.

~X~

You did a really good job at the lighting. The contrast of the dark shading and the lighter warm colors. Great fire by the way, looks real. The only thing I wish is that I could see a closer look at the person in the cave/cliff area. It's hard to see their face and to be able to depict whether it is a man or a woman.

Wow this is really good.

I was just drawing a similar scene for a future game, what a coincidence.