Woah,woah,calm down there,young fella.There isn't anything wrong doing the kid's version because you learn something and that's what counts,no matter how you learn,it's more of the lesson you got from it.Everyone has to start from somewhere.This being said,you did a fine job here,though the first line of the description seems a little random,haha.Just keep practising,you'll get into the art portal soon!