On the unintelligible side.

There's so much I don't understand about this piece. It's a shame, really, because it seems like you had a lot of genuinely interesting ideas. After all, YouTube is ripe for parody. Unfortunately, the whole comic is jumbled, and it appears to have no actual coherence.

While reading this, I was unsure if there was a direction I was supposed to go, or if each drawing was a separate "adventure." I didn't get the "JewFood" joke. Was it just that, a rhyme? I'm not sure if the your/you're mistake was intentional (which honestly reflects YouTube), or if that was a mistake. I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt on that one, because it's a funny joke if it's intentional.

Also, the layout of the comic was kind of unattractive. I understand you were going for a messy, explosive look, but the relatively uniform white space took away from that. Overlapping the drawings was a wise decision; use that more.

There's definitely something here, but without refining the piece, it'll stay buried. I suggest going over it again and making the jokes a little more developed. If you need more than one panel, use another. If that destroys your purpose, drop the joke. Maybe even color the piece in, but that's nothing I took points off for.

Review Request Club

Wait what?

To be honest, I couldn't follow the story line of this comic, so either you should try to work it out a bit better, or I am simply too dumb to get it. XD

Assuming I'm not too dumb, I say you should try to draw some more panels, so the story would become clearer to the reader.

The drawings are actually very decent but I think the comic could use some colours, this would make them even better.
Also the colour would help to "understand" the drawings a bit better. Sometimes I had to have a second look at a panel to get what you drew there.

{ Review Request Club }

It's okay

As far as the comic goes, I honestly can't follow it. Someone getting mad about trolls? There's really no punchline or clever humor to it that I can see...or a real plot of any kind. I suppose the 'not gay' button was a bit funny, and to be honest the drawings aren't terrible really, just doesn't look like you spent a whole lot of time on it, and it's not colored either.

The first frame is quite funny, with the kid bitching for 10 minutes, because we've all seen that a million times. The end is the most confusing really, I just don't think it was done very well at all. The kid presses enter? Then searches? Then uploads something? Don't get how that owned anybody really...So the ending could really have used some work.

Overall it's an okay drawing I suppose, but as far as a clever theme or punchline, I'm not seeing it at all...

-RRC-

i could hardly read it

i guess the characters were drawn well enough, but i cant really say much good about it because i could not even read it. the writing was all over the place, so i couldnt tell what was happening. i cant honestly say anything else

ducks with braces

shit now i've seen everything