I think she looks really nice. However, I'm not sure if the few white lines (such as on the left side of her pants, or hair near the face, or the outline of her for that matter) are a coloring error or intentional in this piece. Also, guessing it is meant to be a little humorous that the corset piece shows her breast are a bit smaller than what the corset is meant to hold. Makes it cute in a way I suppose. Have fun practicing future art styles.