Everyone's favorite gynoid messianic archetype.

It's rare to see Sky Doll fanart on here.

The usage of greens and pinks were nicely done but the wings really sell it. Good work.

im sorry i couldnt bring myself to give you anything, keep tryin tho dont give up

imho

As you asked for constructive critizism I can't help it but give you my opinion:

Her anatomy is kind of weird. Her waist is way too tiny for those hips, also asimetrical, looks like one side of her pelvis is bigger than the other.

The boobies, seems you were little confident, the lines don't shape a circle, and unless your breast have some cyst or something like that it won't be so 'deformed' (I hope you understand what I mean xD My english sucks)
wut else;
I think the breast is way too big for the rest of the body.

But I think this happend to you because you're trying to imitate the style of the comic? Your original drawings are perfect, but the other drawing of Sky Doll you have is also a bit disproportioned.

Hope you wont get mad at me, im not trying to troll. :P

its okay

its not good but its not bad