This goes with all of your work. You have a lot of potential, but your submitted work lacks a final pass, you have high detail in some areas but then in other areas, it becomes muddy. You need to work on your continuity throughout the whole thing. I would recommend the beginners guide to digital painting in photoshop. Don't let the name fool you. It has some amazing quick ways to make your art look a million times better with out much work. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to see more.