Eeh
I can't really tell what's going on.
Try defining important edges a bit more and keep details more subtle
Relax (2002 - 2009)
Pencil on illustration paper colored with Painter 14.5 x 12.5 inches (37 x 32cm)
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All my art is Copyright Steve Allred
Eeh
I can't really tell what's going on.
Try defining important edges a bit more and keep details more subtle