Love the line work

The best thing about your work here is the linework not just this piece but all of your drawings the linework really comes a live and you do have the comic style so thats something you should really persu at some point, but anyways another great piece that with some added color will be a blast.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color.

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comic Quality

I Love it i can see the comic inspiration in your art keep it up

Nice

You got a really good line work.

i like it

i think this is awesome, but the girl on the right needs to have smaller lips maybe?
other than that, i like it ^_^