Very strange face
The facial features are scattered around and really disproportionate. Her left eye isn't supposed to be tilted. It would make sense, due to the angle, but no matter what the angle is, they're both always straight. The nose is too much on the right side of her face. The mouth is too low and on the edge of her face.
If you compare all the facial features except her right eye, they look way off on the facial structure.
Other than that, the rest is well drawn. The hair is very pretty and realistic and so is the shape of her head. The shoulder/arm and neck are realistic, too. Keep working and use references for the face.
