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critique would be highly appreciated!
Anything constructive so I can work on my flaws ^^
To be honest i think if their were to be any thing seriously wrong with this piece foursnail would have pointed it out. He is really good at Critically analyzing art. He's got a good eye and he is not afraid to tell it like it is in nicest way possible. Unless he hates you, which in fact he personally told me that he dose in fact hate you (to any body reading this comment who is not beans the statement above is a inside joke). Until reading his comment i couldn't point out anything wrong with it but now that he mentioned it the inconstancy between parts of the subject that are outlined and the parts that are painted over it dose look strange. But other than that i can't find any other flaws. I really do like that cool canvas texture that you used it looks really cool and it works really well with the water colourish back ground you did. Beans don't get worked up about this stuff. I personally think that out of our whole group i think you are by far the most talented. Yu dun did gud grl.
Hhhhhh thank you dude ;A; It's just that, my inability to paint that well really does get to my head & i'd really like to improve. So, I'm trying to focus on that & I'm sure other people can see what I can't see within my own painting ^^ I just hope i turn out to be a quick learner & rek these betches
Jk. Lol. But i do wanna improve fastly..
Thanks again ^^
Great work! (as usual). Really like the choice of colors. One of the bigger problems I had with this drawing is that some parts have very dark outlines (chin, eyes) while others don't (hair, nose). Even though you probably painted the hair over it, it might look more consistent if you artificially added outlines to the hair or painted away the other outlines. I don't think I see black in the hair it so it makes the black around the eyes seem a bit out of place. It's probably one of the reasons why I think it needs outlines. Hope you keep up the good work!
Thanks snail ^^ yeah, i can see what you mean.. I'll have to try and see how I can manouver it to my own liking and it still looking appropriate (in colouring, features, etc.) as a painting.. Thanks for the critique, I appreciate it. I'll try to work on those..
Well, not to much you should change here, your style is very individual and not much should change. Like really, the coloring and style are so unique and wonderful, there is not much I would personally change. I mean if you really want to, you could work on facial proportions, but it isn't really necessary.
Thanks for the support ^.^
Amazing job drawing the hair. The neck seems to be too long and not fat enough, besides the eyes seem weird (not sure why though sorry). Anyway is a nice draw i hope i could be of any help
I'll try to work on that ^^ thanks
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