i thaik its perty good

the guy below me dose have a point tho but still its your art and you should draw with what what your comfortable with. all i say you should do is add a little more shading to putt some depth on it.

suggesting pencil

pen makes you look like a four year old when you cant draw all that well (IN THIS STYLE!!) you are good, just, as i said before, not realism, try.. expressionism, draw weird things from your mind, you would be good at that:)

wonderful

wow, drawing in pen is more comfortable than pencil but its harder for if you mess up, so anything drawn this good in pen amazes me
i love it