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Feb 18, 2010 | 10:19 AM EST
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Author Comments

Should have been working on my animation, but inspiration strikes hard.
One of my original characters (Whose name is a secret right now), showing off her powers.

Enjoy, criticize, point out the flaws.

Peace.

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AnimithAnimith

Rated 4 / 5 stars

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I think the proportions of the anatomy in general could do with some work. The elbow of the right arm and the knee of the left leg look like they go in instead of out, and in general it looks like she could use a good square meal or two. The right foot looks like it curls at the toes as well, which is a little odd if I'm assuming those shoes are meant to be solid. And the crotch area in genera is a little...yeah. Either her clothes need to be a little looser or that area needs to be drawn a little smoother, if you know what I mean? xD

The shading is good in places, but in others it seems to make less sense. Assuming the light source is the lightning itself, you've got all the light hitting her on her left side, except the top of her...skirt? on her right leg is lightened up as well. The lightning as well could do with a little more presence than a jagged blue line, just to give it more of a feeling that it's throwing light onto her, and give her hands more of a dynamic feel over them. The pose she's got is pretty dynamic, but it almost seems like she's running away from the lightning. Having a bit more context...like a background, or an enemy she's thwarting with her powers, could probably help remedy that.

In genera though, this has pretty good potential. Just take a second look at the limbs and the lightning and this could be improved by a fair bit. Keep it up.

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RogerBKRogerBK

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

I liked the drawing, it seems very nice, but i think it could be way better, because there are some details that you forgot to make...

First of all, I wanna say that the girl remembered me Jade (Yeah Mortal Kombat!!), her clothes are the same, it looked very cool, i liked it, but the arms are too thin for me, she doesn't seems to be very strong... Also, her boobs are way too big, they're bigger than her head (WOW!!) and the lightining going out of her hand is very sloppy, you could add some white lines rounding it, it would look so awesome, because it would give the real impression of lightining...

The drawing itself is very nice, i liked it, you represented very well the girl, but there are lots of stectic errors, but you can improve it, keep on drawing, I know you can... :)

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Roger


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XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Needs backround

I thought this was ok, but still lacks some sorta "BACKROUND" the character is well drawn wouldnt mind seeing some improved shading though maybe make a backround thats related to the character besides just the black backround.

As said just above needs a few changes hope this helps

~X~


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HaggardHaggard

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good

A pretty good character, even though she looks very thin. But it also adds some sort of comical style to the drawing, which looks pretty nice.

However, I think you have to work on the lightening a bit. Right now it looks as if she's holding something in her hands, rather than the lightening coming out of her hands. Some of the lightening should be around her hands (transparent light blue would work here, I guess).

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Mismatched responds:

I do so hope you mean comical as looks like a comic, rather than funny. Cause I really failed in my attempt here if you meant funny.

And I agree, the lightning does need work. I'll be sure to think about your suggestion next time I draw her.

Thanks for the review.


CoopCoop

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good start - more detail please.

I think that you've got a good base with the woman worked out. She is well proportioned and you have a decent action pose set for it. I'm a little confused by the fact you chose to blend the skirt and the shorts together - perhaps separate them by colours.

I'd concentrate on more detail (smoothing) around the breasts and the crotch area, as it appears that she's got a bit of a camel toe going, which may be a focal point for the general consensus of people visiting this site.

As regards the lightning, I would recommend that you make the bolts thinner, sharper and change the colour scheme to something more closely representing white. Sure, add some blues in there for effect, but airbrushing it over the top would seem to work better.

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Mismatched responds:

I'll take the things you mentioned on the lightning into consideration next time, for sure.
As for your suggestion on the skirt and shorts, I'm afraid that won't change. The skirt is attached to the shorts, which is attached the top half too. Basically, its a one piece suit, skirt included.
Thanks for the review.