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4.12 / 5.00

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Jul 28, 2009 | 6:31 PM EDT
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anime
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MariouszMariousz

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good

You know my only complain is that.Avery looks like a girl....just a little.



MayleanCallMayleanCall

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Ooooh, two people!

No real serious critiques for Avery. I like the coloring and pose. His thighs are a tad long. The knee should be up further. The arm reaching to his head is a tad long as well. The eyes are cute, and I LOVE his pants. -drools- I want them. :3

Now for Ava. I agree with the previous post, her face is a tad long. Though I think it adds to the style of the drawing, it isn't proportionate. Very nice placement of the hair. I see, or at least I think, you are having issues with have both sides of the body match. Her shoulders don't match each other position wise and one breast is pointed (Which it shouldn't be mind you) and the other is correctly rounded. Also, her waist looks very much like a tube, coming straight down then doing a sharp curve or turn for the hips. The waist smoothly comes in and then flows right back out for the hips. I also don't like how the skirt lays... I don't know if I feel like it has a lack of movement or if it is something else. On the brighter side, I like the bow. I think it is very cute. I also like her shoes and socks.

A very nice piece and one I truly enjoyed looking at. Please, keep up the good work.


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Mirocka responds:

I love your critiques they really help ;u;
and thank you


ZombiffixZombiffix

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Cool.

The only thing I don't like is the positioning of her skirt's a little weird and her face is a little long.


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Mirocka responds:

thanks, yeah, i know -_-