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I know, its a flat piece. But I drew this so you guys can have somewhat of a understanding of where I am in traditional art.

Constructive criticism is always welcome! ^o^

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Definitely improved from what I last saw of you, however there is a little asymmetry in the eyes and the legs seem one size all the way down. This is why they look too big. The thighs should slope inward to the knee! Watch breast symmetry too. You've got them at the right height but they look like the right is smaller than the left. I don't think you meant for that to happen. Breasts usually also don't point so far opposite each other.

Keep it up!

minichou responds:

Thank you for the constructive reviews ^o^

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