Eh, this is a bit mediocre. Her posing is way off. Torso is too short -- should be some serious rear end in the back but it looks like she got squashed. Hands don't match and look a little deformed, esp the disproportionate fingers and knuckles. Breasts should hang a bit lower and more forward. Head doesn't look like it's attached to the neck. Is there even a neck? Shadowing looks like fuzzy gradients, and there's really no texture to the hair at all. Ears are also wonky. Study realism a bit more. You've got good ideas, but the perspective and lack of detail is killing you in places.

Hmm, I feel like I've seen her before, and what a weirdo name ; )

It's another great drawing I must say. You're really good at drawing different poses and stances. That takes talent right there. Her pose here is particularly impressive to me. I'd have such a hard time drawing something like this. Good job. The shading is very subtle, but it works well enough. The colors are okay, and her eyes are actually very nice. Very pretty. Her lips are well drawn as well. I may have to copy that style in my own drawings. Very nice. And you're really good at drawing hands I have to say. Hands are tough, that's why I usually don't give my characters hands. Overall, nice work. I love it. She's kinda busty for a 14 year old, but well done nonetheless. Thanks for the drawing : )