Notbad at all
Very nice work here and some nice effort aswell, allthough i wouldnt mind seeing some more effects throughout it was a pretty good piece of work, so keep making fantastic stuff like this. I like what you have done here, you have something interesting with lots of colors, i dont understand the text but guess its something, the lightning was good aswell, the backround was pretty neat too, Would have been nice if the colors were more "VIBRANT" maybe even the "LIGHTNING" somewhat more brighter, but other then that you have done very wellon this piece, and it was a pleasure. Now i was really liking the work you put out here today it was something that put some nice effects and elements together, so it was a good piece of art, And i do look forward to more of your work here soon enough.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here is where ill suggest a few ideas if i have any, you already have some good work here so probably wont need much, but if anything ill try and pin point a few areas of needing some attention. Now as for improvments i have suggested some possible lightning, and maybe more brighter and vibrant colors but then it all depends on your ideas aswell.
