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3.41 / 5.00

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Oct 14, 2015 | 3:11 PM EDT
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Illustration
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2560 x 1440 px
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jazza
grimataur

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Author Comments

Pretty happy with this piece, but i will probably update this and change the grimataur to make it more scary looking because i kind of rushed it. but the schoolgirl and the background i am very happy with :)

i don't really have a story for this i just plucked out an idea from my head of a school girl walking in an alleyway xD

comments would be great :) thanks

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CorebunnyCorebunny

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice use of colour. :D .........................
But..... Grimataur must be your focus of the art & where are its horns :P.
Its looking like boyfriend is crying because of break up with her girl friend. XD
Truly nice colour work :)



BrokencreationBrokencreation

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The problem is, is that the Grimataur is supposed to be the key focus of the image. very large and hulking in build with a humanoid body frame.

Also the perspective of the background seems flat. is that the floor behind Grimmy or is that a wall ?

Overall a pretty good drawing but it is missing the point of the contest mate.

Next time follow the brief closer to be more accurate with what has been asked of you to create.

Hope this helps for your future contest entries in other Jazza contests and such :3


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DjoreshDjoresh

Rated 3 / 5 stars

It looks nice, but the grimataur is really not scary this way.

It's as if he is the desperate geek reaching out to the girl who denies him. Also keep perspective in mind. the tiles of the floor are going straight up instead of into the distance.

keep it up, I see good progression


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