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This was great, interesting story, looking forward to more stuff from you.

I loved it, Ryan. Very cool concept.

I like the design and motion betwen frames in this comic, probably the only submission so far that made me a little creeped out. Hope it wins.

Outside of the artwork and writing (which was pretty damn good), the most outstanding part of this comic was the structure. For example: on this page the third picture bleeds behind the first two, but because it's raining in all three shots, they flow together as one image. The use of closure here is really excellent.

Great job!