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Mar 2, 2013 | 1:23 PM EST
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It's not good, but I don't know what exactly is wrong.
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Everything is wrong, I know, but I don't know how to improve it :-)

Please specify what exactly is wrong and share your tips :-)

Thanks!

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JazzaJazza

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The background and characters work quite well with each other. Their linework and color are a compliment to each other. I'd recommend practicing your construction work to maintain proportion, their limbs could be a little thicker and the're all in the same pose. They could also do with having some shadow under their feet, otherwise this is creative and fun and fits your intent well! Keep it up :)


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Maras responds:

Thanks a lot for the review!