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3.48 / 5.00

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Nov 24, 2016 | 9:42 PM EST
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Illustration
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768 x 1024 px
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166.4 kb
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disgaea
seraphina
pokemonartacademy

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Seraphina-sama!!!

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Chat-manChat-man

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It's okay, but there are a few things I think need attention. It's a great start and looks amazing at first glance, but I noticed some stuff.
First, work on the lines. It's fine to change the thickness throughout a drawing but you have to keep weight and balance in mind. Her hand has really thick lines for no apparent reason and it's off-putting. Think about your line quality as you continue your pieces in the future.
Also try to work on proportions, her hand on the left there seems very large and the arm it's attached to is a bit too long as well. You could also help your drawing look less stiff and more lifelike by making the hair bend more to gravity and the shape of her body.
Lastly, work on shading and coloring. It looks very unfinished and awkward, especially on her arm to the right of the drawing. Perhaps try to blend the lines more and have them compliment her shape better.
Overall, it's not a bad start! There's a lot of potential here and I'm looking forward to what you've got in store for the future. Hope my lil' critique could help at all :D


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MaouKouichi responds:

Thanks a lot for this, i'm still working on steady my hands. And yes this drawing looks kinda rush, it's cause it is rushed, you can't draw on differents layers on this and i made her with clothes first, but well... excuses are excuses, thanks for the advices


zscalezzscalez

Rated 5 / 5 stars

how did you even upload the photo from pokemon art academy?


MaouKouichi responds:

In the album options select "export" and it saves to the sd, then copy to pc.


HyrulesEliteHyrulesElite

Rated 5 / 5 stars

looks pretty damn good to me


MaouKouichi responds:

Thank you


mesorocksmesorocks

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I like it!!!


MaouKouichi responds:

Thanks


superraughsuperraugh

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I wouldn't wank to this b/c it has few detail


MaouKouichi responds:

Good for you, keep your wanking on high standards