shadows :(

Some nice moddeling in there, however to b honest what most grabs my attention is the horrid hard shadows. If it were my work id either try and get much softer shadows cast by some form of indirect lighting or just tern them off all together.

by the way what software are u using?

Better i thought

~~REVIEW~~
and here are some better pieces with more of the visuals more detailed then the one with the logo and all, it all seemed to be a work in progress as there was lots of parts that really needed to work together, i have really enjoyed reviewing these as i love to see how things work, but awsome job all around here very nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think Some sorta crazy backround like a rainbow warp in the backround would really show off the pieces in a better light.

~X~

lol

i think it wont work that way...