to be honest, i actually really liked it. i believe that you should look up some useful guides on human (and anime) anatomy to work on drawing limbs (im only talking about her legs and hands in this drawing), but hey; that's just my opinion. overall, i think you've done a great job. especially with her skin; i love how you captured that blushed-red tone with her skin color. that extra detail went a long way for me on this picture.
[[[im not sure about the "Everyone" rating for this one based on her pose and the amount of skin showing, but if you haven't gotten any flags for it, i guess its ok?]]]