Very good drawing. That was my favorite part of all 12 episodes... lol. But seriously, it was a shame it bombed in japan. So they only made one season, but here is some good news... They're now airing it on [adult swim]'s toonami!! There's even talk of a SECOND SEASON. have the anime. have all the manga. love it all!

Nice piece, I'd class this and most of your other art works as "a good start". Basically what you need to do know (in my opinion) is get your hands on some drawing software. It doesn't have to be one that requires money like Photoshop, you could get GIMP which is just as good but free. Then what you need to do is make the lines darker and add colour or if you prefer to keep it in black and white more shade, finally a background, even though not a lot can be seen of the background in this piece it's always nice have something there.

Its a really nice work done. I dont like the manga stile personally, but i appreciate it.
The better thing on your work its basically the details: That seems the picture more complex than really is, but Its a good one-line drawing.
Finishing, I hope you have a good future here, in Newgrounds... only if you get scouted first.

Nice!

I like it how accurate the forms are. All you need is improvement on the shadowing. ^^

Tri-life

Nice, really nice :).

I like the nose, it's well done and not in a wrong size. Because the noses I draw always get something wrong.

However, the shadows. They didn't work out really really well, maybe you could have faded it a little bit.
But they are at the positions where they belong, and that's a good point too :D.

Due to the lack of colors (which isn't a minus) I'm more looking at the shadows. Because they give some color to the drawing, if you know what I mean.
And when they are not very perfect, I am inclined to dislike it. Which isn't exactly true with this one, but it's a minus of one star :).

I recommended you for the portal, because I know you can draw fuckin' well :D. Godd luck with other drawings!