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City of Masks- 4

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HOLYSHITLOTSADIALOGUE. And a new character and setting, oh my! This is a flashback intended to explain a few little things, in case you haven't gathered that.
Page four of my comic. The other three are in my gallery, though the first one will take a bit of digging to find.
I'm enjoying this, and I think it's gonna help my art a lot as I continue with it.

Since my handwriting sucks, the dialogue says:
Short-haired Girl: If you don't mind my asking, what exactly is it that you two do?
Long-haired girl: Have you ever travelled outside the city?
S-H Girl: Of Course!
L-H Girl: Well, then, you know full well that most of the city is abandoned, right? The parts left by those who came before, I mean.
S-H Girl: What about them?
L-H Girl: We scavenge those areas for parts, and sell them to those who can use them. Their technology was so profound. There's so much we could do with it if the government wasn't so damned stingy!
S-H Girl: So you're basically black-market traders? How naughty!
L-H Girl: It's illegal, sure, but we're really not doing anything wrong. We do background checks and such to make sure none of our customers intend to make doomsday machines, torture devices, death cannons, or anything of the sort. Most of the technology was agricultural or medical, if you'd believe it. Fascinating stuff.

Yes, these characters will get names in the future.
Comments and critique are appreciated. I always respond.

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I want more

This story interested me a lot but I think you should take your time and complete as anything but throw a pity that artists can not upload full comic at one time would be very useful to make a comic and not have to upload 24 images one by one .

I have no criticism to the characters because I take as a simple sketch (but that does not mean they are bad but you can do something else done with them).

Luxembourg responds:

Yeah, I kind of feel like nobody will get the point of the story as a whole if it's done in increments, but there's not much else to do.
I am taking my time. I don't want to burn myself out, and I'm trying to make the art on each page a little better than the last page in some way. I don't feel like there's any rush, so I'm doing this as I see fit.
As for the characters, we're still at the point of introducing them and setting the story up. I have one more smaller character and one more major character to introduce (since this story isn't going to be some long-term, ongoing thing, I've already planned much of the story out and it mostly revolves around these three and one more. I can't imagine it being more than 50 pages total when finished, but we'll see) before we've got our main cast and I can start really fleshing everybody out.
I hope I got what you're saying here, because I'm not entirely sure. Glad you like it, though. Thanks for the comment.

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