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in school we were assigned to do a slasher-comic. But we only had one day so I decided to steal the two female characters from the web-comic platinum grit. It is worth a read. And don't worry, I promise not to make anything this retarded again.. For awhile..



Rated 4 / 5 stars

I opted giving this a 0 because I feel neglected

but then again meh... Nice lines, some anatomy issues (small body in third panel) teeth too much forward in the fifth panel (actually that whole face is a bit weird). I like how you introduce the cliche setting.
My favourite panel has to be the first one; the framing, perspective use of black. just seems of another level than the other panels. nr.2 and 6 are okay too.
I dislike how the center parting between the 3/4 and the 5/6 is a bit differently placed.

Lundsfryd responds:

Aaah.. That's sweet.. I will be back real soon, then we can catch up :)
I can't do anything but agree with your points. The character inconsistency is the worst part I think. The problem is that I decided to do three mediocre pages instead of just a single good looking one. That was a dumb move. (I will just respond to all your comments here). The second page is also my favorite. The boogyman is quite funny in my opinion, and it was a simple solution that saved me a lot of time. And i actually like the smooch-font. So that one I was happy with. Again i agree with page 3. Everything but the Rick Astley drawing sucks. But I was out of time. Thanks for the feedback, J-qb = AWSOMENESS!! :D