Cameraman: Okay miss. I want you to slowly reach the guy.
The guy: Then, I'll fuck her.
Cameraman: No. Not yet. You'll get stabbed first by her knife.
The guy: What!?
Cameraman: Relax. She isn't holding a real one. Right miss?
The woman: Of course. Of course. Ceeeeertainly. This isn't a real one. *giggles*
Cameraman: After that, you'll steal the knife from her and throw it away.
The guy: Then, I'll fuck her?
Cameraman: No. Not yet. You'll get behind her back and then...
The woman: You'll stab me.
The guy: Hohoho. Aggressive, aren't we?
Cameraman: Right. You'll stab her with the knife.
The guy: What!? I thought for sure-
Cameraman: C'mon dude! Follow the script!
The guy: Okay. Fine.
The woman: Relax. In the end, we'll have all the fun we need. *smirks*
Cameraman: OK. Moving on. When you are about to stab her, you got entranced by her naked body.
The guy: And then I am going to fuck her?
Cameraman: Yup. You'll get fucked up.
The woman: Ohhh. Let's get started, shall we?
The guy: Wait. One quick question. The environment feels disturbing. Are we really going to film here?
The cameraman: Relax. It's part of the setting. Those were there before when it's not yet your turn. Think of it as part of the props. Hehehehe.
hmm
I think you could have done a better job with the story, it feels like you just winged it. I'd have left out all the manurisms like *smirk* and *giggle* and narrated it regularly instead of script-like.
I think you could have done better with the pic as well. Keep practicing both and you'll get better.
Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. :D
As for the story, truth is I thought of adding the description as a story on the spot. I have no time editing it. So yup. It feels like that.
But anyway, thanks for the review. I'll try my best improving my background as well as the details.
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