Your art is beautiful in way, but since I don't want to make smug jokes about the girl's armour needing to be like bikini or whatever, I'll just say that personally I think that the character's head actually look a little out of place and legit in comparison to her body suit in way, especially the 3rd last piece. I recommend that you should add some head wear or helmet for the character to make the flesh to metal parts seem more able to blend together, if you are going to make more of such designs, otherwise, your character's suit design seem pretty, in a technology fashion style sense. Also, maybe due to the impression of her red spread out hair style, it also gave me a legit impression of a jungle cave girl wearing a advance high tech suit.

I like this armor. Is more realistic, then iron bikini. And girl so cute :3

Sorta reminds me of the crackdown character progression.

This feels like Gears of War meeting Megaman and i love it !

But she's a female character her armor should be bikinis...
However this is pretty awesome! o.o