Author's Comments
A little something i did for the Notepad collab... i felt it needed a bit of colour so i inked it in... made a bit of a mess mind you but still :P - Comment and Crit heavly welcome... Enjoy
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.5 / 10
The only thing I like of anime girls with guns is elfves (but not elves with guns >:P) ANyways, I was going to critique on why you didn't edit out the lines, but I see you did that inentionally, I honetsly love the effect! Along with the slightly wrinkled effect. Its not easy to get blue to show up like that, is it shopped? The only thing that confuses my is why there is pencil shavings next to a fountain pen...
Author's Response:
well you see... the background was given to me to work on for the collab... i then did a "pencil" sketch of it... then coloured it in with watered down ink... of course i managed to make a mess and get a coffee stain on it while i was working on my other picture :P... it was all done in flash mx... beacuse im poor an cant get a proper art program :(
i love this but the look on her face lack something not sure what^^
Author's Response:
i was told to make a woman atrative... there must be one tiny thing wrong with her... so im told :3... but i cant really improve something if even you dont know what it is...
boobs!!!!
(am I the only one who thinks this way mostly?)
Author's Response:
your a newgrounds user... if you dont think like that... you have come to the wrong place...
u should of added color..........its cool still............wait her bodies too big for her head in my opinion...(not that it matters)...waahaahhaaaaa!!!!!
Author's Response:
it was for the note pad collab.... i wanted her to look like a doodle with a bit on ink colouring that i might do if i had some spare time... and yeah... i see what you mean about the head been smaller then the body... didnt notice it untill now :S
its pretty nice :D, i noticed it in the flash collab and looked you up :D
great work
Author's Response:
why thank you...
I am a terrible drawer, but I am going to learn to draw and thanks to you, Im going to submit my own drawings once I get better!
Thank you!
j4
Author's Response:
nice to see that my work *as well as others most likey* has inspired you to make your own works of art... i will be sure to keep an eye out for your name popping up in the art portal in the future!...
absoulutly perfect you draw the best anime chiks on newgrounds (exaggeration)
Author's Response:
im affraid you view on the subject may be short sighted... there is many users who draw anime on newgrounds and i fell that i am not one of the best... vortex00 for example draws anime girls very nicely... and thats just one of the many users on newgrounds...
How long did this take to make?
Because I can tell you put a lot of time into this!
Author's Response:
not sure how long... around 3 to 5 hours i would say from start to finish... i just kept redoing the linework that took most of the time... then after i did that it was mostly drawing it out and inking it... the added details to ad a touch of realism...
I can barely spot any problems in this picture. But sadly there are some. The right boob looks bigger than the left, I couldn't help but notice that. :3
Also, the left arm looks a bit disjointed when it's going down. Other than that there are some minor problems that can barely be called problems. Although compared to the rest of the pic the problems should barely even be considered because this picture is good.
Author's Response:
well... they are massive and in reality its very common for one to be slightly bigger then the other... but i see your point :3.... with the arm... i think the problem is the glove thing... its trying to sugest that her arm has ended up at a different angle... thanks for the review... but its good to write a review pointing out the minor things... it means next time there wont be any minor problems :P
its... its.... (sniff) the best thing iv seen in a long time
Author's Response:
then you should really vist the art portal more.. theres a ton of fantastic artwork in there... :3
It very good, i like the... well Everything ;) Fantastic piece of artwork
lol i like the cup stain actually especially lol
Author's Response:
yeah, i was trying to go all out with the amount of rubbish and stuff i could put onto of the the artwork to make it seem like a real scribble instead of a computer made one... thanks for the review :3
Inspired by Warhammer 40k perhaps? You've got some painting skills.
Author's Response:
inspired by lots of things... 40k is something i paint when i have some spare time... i enjoy painting models and creating ones from scratch but i dont see anything on the girl (apart from possibly the wep and minor details here and there that would class her as been 40kish :3
Thats pretty nice, not in a perverted way though, u got talent.
Author's Response:
why thank you... i will try get some more things like this done in the future :3
i mean i can draw manga but u can draw *manga* lol
Author's Response:
*manga*... if you say so... thanks on the comment but i would like to see more Crit in your comments... telling my im better at drawing manga then you isnt a great help to improving my later works?...
all i can say is please make more(hay it never hurts to ask)
Author's Response:
ok will do... see an i need four pieces to be scouted (i got unscouted due to people higher on the list) so im sure more will be coming onto the portal soon :3
Nice work, I like hand-made drawings!
Author's Response:
did it with a mouse, i have a table that works but im not used to it yet... iv slowly getting better at it... i think i need some better software other then flash to do art in... its not really a art program as such... :P
Whoa that pen was drawn very well I men hot damn sonny the detail and the what nots. Damn you for tricking me into thinking it was real porno. As for the rest it was okay expect for the ridiculous boobs which were fap-to-able
Author's Response:
someone asked for me to do a combination of the zelot i did with the girl i drew in the same fourm post... so why not... he also asked for huge boobs so thats what he got... i quote "took the huge boobs to heart"... the pen was ment to have thinner lines but i never did it for some reason... oh well :P
Very good, but it borrows a bit heavily from those two ideas. I just guess that alot of ideas have already been tapped. You tapped it good however.
Author's Response:
dont know what either one of them "animes?" are... i must look into them at some point if what im doing is very close to it... might give me some more ideas on what to do next... thank you
nine tailed the leg looks fine to me... btw great image
Author's Response:
i still think they look wrong to be honest... either one needs to be wider or the other slimmer... thanks for the review but it doesnt help me improve... :S
On looking at this picture, it is very good. My only suggestion to you, and it's only because it looks a little weird to me, is that you take a look at your legs. Look at the one with the arm going over it. I think that looking at this one compared to the other one, that it starts off too thinly. Overall, though, very good job!
Author's Response:
i realised this after looking at it... i should have droped back the knee so it was under her arm/hand... its nearly twice as fat (if not)... thanks for the review...
pretty cool
Author's Response:
thanks but it doesnt really help me improve my future work...
It's pretty nicely done in my opinion. The head feels like it's out of perspective though, the face in particular.
Author's Response:
true... i could have enlarged her eyes and toned down the anime style head... but come on... in compairison to them huge things underneath it doesnt seem so bad... :P... (please note i was asked to do a hot chick in a mech suit with huge breasts... supose i took it to seriously :P) thanks for the review...
