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Daily 3rd Place –
08/24/2009
Author's Comments
Yes... another boob thumb-nail to add to the portal... this is my submision for the level collab in the art fourms... i just added a jazzy background so it wasnt as plain.... im not keen on her right hand as it looks awful... i might redo this at a later stage... if you find anymore problems just write a comment... i love to see what you people think of it... if you view in full size you can see it alot better...
Ciao
-LegolaSS
**UPDATE / 2**
Make the line underneath the raised eyebrow subtler / Add the tip of the ear on other side of head / a couple of belt buckle holes / Shading on abdomen / lips more of a flesh tone green / hair to head problem fixed / added framework / added Shinny skin / repaired some loose shading
**UPDATE / 1**
Redone background / Added shading / Fixed arrow problem
ANY PROBLEMS PM ME OR LEAVE A COMMENT SO I CAN FIX IT!
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.1 / 10
Definitely my second favorite out of all of your work. The only thing I could complain about is that the left breast looks like it's... looking at something else. haha, it's kinda pointed off to the side of the screen, but maybe that's just an illusion due to the fact that it's actually covered in fabric? I'm not sure. Anyways, great job!
1 of the best ive seen yet and the hottest
What I'm going to say isn't something you haven't heard, but it's also good to remember.
You said that you want the main focus in where its needed, and i agree, but i would have put some little more light effects in the background, like some sun beams coming through the leafs and woods, something to justify her clothes and bow shines, u know? It's a little disproportionate such a good look'n elf in a background relatively simple. Even with a better elaborated background anyone would put their eyes in woods instead of a beautiful elf, wouldn't they?
And about all the rest, its really good, but... (what about her navel?) o.o
The fantasy environment combine perfectly with her clothes (like you said, warcraft II, LOTR an stuff).
I'm just giving my opinion, considering the fact I'm far to be expert.
It's very nice.
One thing is the shading is pretty consistent but at the knees it goes too blocky. The rest of her body its a smooth transition.
Author's Response:
i quite liked how it went blockly and orange/brown... the main focus is the main body and head...
i see what you mean about the hand... in reality gravity would have that bow on the floor. you should have made the fingers one layer, bow the next, then the back of the hand and the wrist on the top.about the W3 thing... i <3 you for that. WC3 pwns. LAEDORON(i think?) server FTW. Nice art. she wouldnt be able to move much with that much encumbrance, she would be slow and they would bounce out from under that strap )=... too bad they didn't
Author's Response:
its art... i can do what ever i like... seems to work in moives and them saucy pop videos... *they use tape :P*... as for the "omg you should have used layers" the hand is on its own layer and im going to sort it out when i have time... beacuse thats one of the reasons its getting bad reviews...
Well, this is certainly a piece that could class as a World of Warcraft fan art submission - have you considered sending it in to them so that you can get published there?
I think that your issue with the right hand isn't something to worry about, as it wasn't noticeable, until I read your notes on it all. The detail is good - sparse where it is not needed and not overkill where it comes into play. Lots of high fantasy elves tend to have leaf motifs crawling across their armour and shields. Perhaps this could have been picked out on the armour, to give a nice additional look. I would have worked with making the background look a bit more detailed, giving more shades of green and a more dark, mysterious tone to the piece.
I also think that she's wearing a little too little in key places - If she puts down her quiver, there is more than just a hint of nipple on show. Even in a comical sense, the costume would need to be practical overall. Perhaps a crop top style for the top and then the strap for the quiver between the comically oversized breasts, as this will then accentuate that look as well.
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Author's Response:
well co-op, i like warcraft 3 so thats most likey where it came from... and i dont do art for money... not my style... anyway... it might not be noticeable but it really pisses me off everytime i see it... i wanted to do more to it but i was short on time... i wanted to keep it rather basic as i was still trying new ideas and taking tips from other artists... as for the background i added it as a quick background so that she wasnt just standing in the middle of a grey box... its my piece for the level collab in the art fourms... i have already altered the background so it doesnt stand out as much... i want the main focus to remain where its needed... as for the clothing... i see where your coming from... il keep it in mind for when i do proper pieces and not just blatenly trying to get more views :P
she remind me like the elf in the " donjon de naheulbeuk" only more sexy and less silly
your art is interesting, because its inconsistant, as if you were still searching for a style that fit you ( not saying this negatively)
what im saying is that none of your work is like the next, wich is good ^^
Author's Response:
im still trying out new ideas... im currently working from ideas and things i picked up during my studies during Fineart... like you said im still trying to get a style that im happy with... at the moment im getting ideas and tips from all sorts of artists on newgrounds so sometimes a picture might sway closer to a type of artists work... or anothers... im trying to see what people like the most and then work from there... its a learning experiance that it still in the process of doing... i dont want to copy a Style of art... i want to make my own... but to do so i need to learn from others... thanks for the review..
- in this case xD
looking damn sexy (thats the only word to describe this :D )
great artwork, nice highlights
Author's Response:
thats for the review... but for future reference... please let me know what i can improve as well as what things you like... its nice to know you like, but please leave some crit next time... thanks again for the review :3
nice very nice..i wish i could draw on my computer like that but all i can draw with is a pencil and paper so ill give u props
Author's Response:
im still learning how to draw on a computer... all my final stuff is in lines beacuse they are smooth and fine... where as the bush tool seems to go all over the place and gets straight lines... if i knew how to have the realistic look that would be cool...
impractical armor.... or even clothing, is the elve's special power to not die despite wearing a hundredth of what everyone else is. despite the impracticality of the contents it is a well drawn picture.
Author's Response:
armor is over rated... archers arnt ment for hand to hand combat anway... hopefully her grace will be un hindered with such freedom so she can dodge arrows and move swifty out of battle... that is the elves speicality... thanks for the comment
dude the second i saw that i hade to get a par of larger pants man thats sweet
Author's Response:
... right...
awsome
Author's Response:
let me guess... awsome?
Good job, I was scrolling through the lvls collab forum topic when I saw this. There's a lot of little stuff I could nitpick at, but I'll mention only the two major things I noticed aside from the hand you mentioned.
First, for the hand holding the arrow, you should make the arrow going behind her entire wrist and not just the bracelet part.
Also I see there's shading on the breasts, but you need to slap some shading on that cloth covering it as well, It's looking pretty flat. I do see a little bit there in the folds, but I'm talking something that matches the contour for the bust relatively well.
And if you wanted to get really clever with this.. you could add a shadow coming down from the arm above her boob with the belt covering it.
Author's Response:
darn it!... how did i miss all them points... its alot easyer to see them when you didnt draw it... right... back to the drawing board to tidy my picture up...
*im going to leave the hand untill i feel up to the challenge :P*... you see... i missed out the hands so i could work on them later on... so they were on their own layer.. thus meaning the arrow was behind it but the main body was behind the arrow... thus why it looks like that... il slap some heavy shading on the cloth so it maches with the rest of the XTREAM boobage... and... il have ago with that shadow from the arm... im good at spotting stuff like this... how come i cant see it when i draw it >.<... anway... going to work on it now >:{
Ahh i see what you did there.Think you've picked a great idea for lvl 49.
I like the eyes, the hand holding the arrow, the shading on the knees, and the imaginative way you've supported her knockers.
Reading Kagoe's review, I now get the vibrant background, but the tree silhouettes are a bit dominating.
Great stuff, fella.
Author's Response:
come on... level 49 was made for her!... i have to agree.. the eyes and hand holding the arrow are my favourt parts, i wanted her to fade out a bit at the bottom... but i rather like it how it stand *no pun intended*... of course... been all natural and all... you need to find a natural way of support... dont want them getting in the way when your about to fire an arrow.. :S... i just quickly whipped out some old symbols from animations i were working on, gave them the neutral green tint and wacked in the green newgrounds aura as a background behind it all... i wanted to make sure that the aura theme stood out as well as her... but yeah... i could have toned down the green... mabey adding a white mist over the top so it wasnt so bright... something to keep in mind for the future!...
I can see where you messed up on the left hand. Hardly noticeable, but it isn't that bad.
This being a sexy bodacious elf wielding a bow and arrow, I have to favorite this.
Author's Response:
the hand i dont like is the one holding the bow :P... that last line actuly made me laugh out loud for once... i should really do more artwork... who knows... i might get good at it :3
this is awesome, literaly my eyes nearly came out of their holes
Author's Response:
i think you should see a doctor about that... its not normal
i think the way you've drawn & coloured her is very effective. My only critisim is the background is a bit too bright and doesn't rly make her stand out as much as she should.
Author's Response:
the background is just a quick thing i through together... i can see what you mean about it been bright... her aura is neutral so i wanted to make sure it was clear... thanks for your views on the picture... Ciao
Make her a bit more modest and you can put her on the Blizzard fan art page.
Author's Response:
first of all... she is not some sort of WoW player... she is just an elf with the NEWGROUNDS level 49 icon as a wepon... please comment on the artwork instead of what you think i should do with it...
becuase she hot
Author's Response:
but does that doesnt make good art?... please write more constructive comments in future...
