I know that feel, bro.
Like the cartoon style you are going for here. It's something I can imagine as a comic or even an animation.
For the title: It's barely realdable. The axe obscures too much of it. All I can read is "P......CIDE".
Also, I believe the black spots in the title are supposed to be caved in. In that case, the blood splatters do not touch these parts and they should have been left black. Also, it drops no shadow...just saying
But these are really my only complaints about this picture. Everything else seems perfectly fine to me. Character looks cool, idea is nice and so is the style. I like it.