Notbad work

Well this was notbad, I like the linework and use of color combonations here, onlything you could ad onto this would be some backround work like some scene or field or something like that, maybe even adding a sparkle to the sword, but other then that this was pretty good stuff if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sparkle on the sword, some backround work etc.

~X~

Pretty nice. And he's got the new sword, too. :) Only thing I can think of improving are the edges. They look a bit sharp (which is a big thing to improve though, I guess). Maybe all that's really missing is the shading, that might make the outlines less apparant. Keep it going!

-cd-