And I thought scorpions were awful. Your description painted a picture of a bug that could be both camoflauged and poisonus which can really be the stuff of nightmares! But despite the awesome description your drawing did little justice to it. The piece was more of a picture then a drawing!
You could have put the bug in any setting you want, something that really shows the bug in all of its glory... but instead you made it sit on a tree. Boring. You didn't even make it that appealing, most of the bug is a leaf and hides 90% of its body, there's really nothing to look at other than the better than average shading you did...