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The Escape

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I accidentally submitted the wrong one.

This is the Final version of my Robot.

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Mmmmm...hard to say...

Should I like this or cut it down? Eh, i'll give it good and bad points here.

THE GOOD:

The robot is nice and detailed, I like his design and I like the planets and their slight glow.

THE SHITTY:

The mountains are kind of fucked up. The white parts (if they're a reflection or snow) look wwaaaaayyy out of place, and it's kinda wierd how the flooring is grass but then when you look out in the distance it passes the purple boarder.

In short, needs a little work, but I liek it, and that's all that matters ^,...,^

HMMM...

cool stuff man... but! distinctions between the brown ground and the building shud be less detailed, i mean it looks like the ground just suddenly becomes buildings...

but hey, everything looks better than some people have done... oh yeah the colors of the objects and background somehow dont mix right....

wat are those blue-red cop crusier looking things?

Well...

Not gonna lie, the robot is quite a sexy aspect of the picture but you mugged it all up... you're focusing on the wrong things, you see when an audience views a picture they of course notice the best detailed thing first... unless it takes up less that 65% of the picture. The focus should be on the robot of course but you didn't make it subtle enough, it's too obvious as was the fact you got lazy. You could have taken the extra 2 hours to make a half-decent background, the main focus should make the reader say: "great picture!" NOT "great robot" You need to start with an amazingly detailed background with your best art, then slam that robot on the front and blur up the background a bit making everyone say: "Holy F**k that is amazing, look at all the detail" NOT "~Nice dude~" that's a lame review man... work on it, in fact strip the background and make a good one!

Hope I helped =]

Kinsei responds:

Damn boy, If I didn't know any better I'd say you were standing over my shoulder as I worked on this. Very nice analysis.
You were spot on with just about everything. In truth I did get very lazy on this, I had spent the better part of a week on the robot and I was sick of looking at it. I rushed out the background and that was a very poor mistake by me. I should have taken my time.

This folks is a very solid review. Thanks man. Perhaps in the near future I can get the chance to rework that background to do the robot justice.

nice

nice dude OH SHIT the robot thing i should do one

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